Help! Hurry ! Can anyone correct the two paragraphs?
I am a Chinese student. I will take a English exam tomorrow, but my teacher can not help me to correct the final four paragraphs . Can anynoe help me? (just 150-180 words per paragraphs) Thanks a lot
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Food safety is an important public issue, because the food safety influences human health directly. In September, there are several occurrence of tainted milk powder in Taiwan and Hong Kong. The SnaLu Group in China added the uneatable chemical compound melamine to the milk powder and exported the tainted milk powder to the world for several years. Malamine is a kind of chemical compound used in plastic dish. Eating the melamine contaminated food will cause the kidney disease.
Although China government had banned the sale of mild powder from SunLu Group, there maybe other kind of tainted food sold in our supermarket. For the consumers, they should be careful in gradient, origin and expired date of food. For the government, the officials should make the test strictly. In this way, I believe that it can ensure the food safety through the cooperation between public and government.
(2)Chinese New Year
Chinese New Year and spring festival is the most important of the traditional Chinese holidays. It is also the most special holiday different from western countries. According to tales and legends, the beginning of Chinese New Year started with the fight against a mythical beast called the Nian. People used firecracks to frighten the Nian and from then on , the Nian never came to village again.
The festival traditionally begins on the first day of the first lunar month in Chinese calendar and ends on the 15th. On the day before the new year my family always give our home a through cleaning to sweep away the bad luck of last year. At the eve of Chinese New Year, my uncle’s family, aunt’s family and my family will eat dinner including fish and new year cake together in my home to celebrate the coming of New Year. The first day of the new year, my brother and I will get the red packets containing cash from my parents and we always buy the firecrackers and set off these in the park. During the second day of the new year, my family always go to my grandmother’s home and eat lunch with her.
August 8, 2009 at 7:04 AMiLoveKannada
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Food safety is an important public issue, because the food safety influences human health directly. In September, there were several occurrence of tainted milk powder in Taiwan and Hong Kong. The SnaLu Group in China added the uneatable chemical compound melamine to the milk powder and exported the tainted milk powder to the world for several years. Malamine is a kind of chemical compound used in plastic dish. Eating the melamine contaminated food will cause kidney related disease.
Although China government had banned the sale of mild powder from SunLu Group, there maybe other kind of tainted food sold in our supermarket. For the consumers, they should be careful in gradient, origin and expired date of food. For the government, the officials should make the test strictly. In this way, I believe that we can ensure the food safety through the cooperation between public and government.
(2)Chinese New Year
Chinese New Year and spring festival is the most important of the traditional Chinese holidays. It is also the most special holiday different from western countries. According to tales and legends, the beginning of Chinese New Year started with the fight against a mythical beast called the Nian. People used firecrackers to frighten the Nian and from then on , the Nian never came to village again.
The festival traditionally begins on the first day of the first lunar month in Chinese calendar and ends on the 15th. On the day before the new year my family give our home a through cleaning to sweep away the bad luck of last year. At the eve of Chinese New Year, my uncle’s family, aunt’s family and my family will eat dinner including fish and new year cake together in my home to celebrate the coming of New Year. The first day of the new year, my brother and I will get the red packets containing cash from my parents and we always buy the firecrackers and set off these in the park. During the second day of the new year, my family always go to my grandmother’s home and eat lunch with her.
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August 10, 2009 at 3:49 PMPolishlearner
Just copy exactly this I rewrote it ^_^
Food safety is an important public issue, because the food safety influences human health directly. In September, there were several occurrences of tainted milk powder in Taiwan and Hong Kong. The SnaLu Group in China added the uneatable chemical compound melamine to the milk powder and exported the tainted milk powder to the world, for several years Melamine is a kind of chemical compound used in plastic dishes. Eating the melamine contaminated food will cause kidney disease.
Although, China’s government had banned the sale of milk powder from SunLu Group, there maybe other kinds of tainted food sold in our supermarket. For the consumers, they should be careful in gradient, origin and expired date of food. Government officials should make the test strictly. In this way, I believe that it can ensure the food safety through the cooperation between public and government.
Chinese New Year and the spring festival are the most important of the traditional Chinese holidays. It is also one of the most special holidays in western countries. According to tales and legends, the beginning of Chinese New Year started with the fight against a mythical beast called the Nian. People used firecrackers to frighten the Nian. From then on, the Nian never came to village again.
The festival traditionally begins on day one day of the first lunar month on the Chinese calendar and ends on the 15th. On the day before the new year my family always gives our home a through cleaning to sweep away the bad luck of the last year. At the eve of Chinese New Year, my uncle’s family, aunt’s family and my family will eat dinner together including fish and new year cake at my home to celebrate the coming of New Year. On the first day of the new year, my brother and I will get red packets containing cash from my parents and we always buy the firecrackers and set them off in the park. During the second day of the new year, my family always go to my grandmother’s home and we all eat lunch with together.
I think you should add more though. Hope this helps!
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August 14, 2009 at 3:22 AMRosemarie873
Food safety is an important public issue because it directly influences human health. In September, there were several occurrences in Taiwan and Hong Kong where milk powder was tainted with melamine. The SnaLu Group in China added the inedible chemical compound melamine to milk powder and exported it to the world for several years. Melamine is a chemical compound used in plastic dishes. Eating melamine contaminated food can cause kidney damage.
Although the Chinese government has banned the sale of milk powder from SunLu Group, there maybe other kinds of tainted food sold in our supermarkets. Consumers should look more carefully at the ingredients, origins and expiration dates of their food. The government should have stricter rules for food testing. Through these measures and through cooperation between the public and the government, I believe that we can ensure food safety.
(2)Chinese New Year
Chinese New Year and Spring Festival is the most important traditional Chinese holiday. This special holiday is very different from the New Year celebrations in Western countries. According to legend, the beginning of Chinese New Year started with the fight against a mythical beast called the Nian. People used firecrackers to frighten the Nian, who from then on, never came to village again.
The festival traditionally begins on the first day, of the first lunar month, in Chinese calendar and ends on the 15th. On the day before the New Year, my family always gives our home a thorough cleaning to sweep away the bad luck of last year. On the eve of Chinese New Year, my uncle’s family, my aunt’s family and my family will come together in my home and eat a dinner of fish and New Year cake to celebrate the coming of New Year. On the first day of the New Year, my brother and I will receive red packets containing money from my parents, and we always buy firecrackers and set off these in the park. During the second day of the New Year, my family goes to my grandmother’s home and eats lunch with her.
This is the best I can do. Maybe someone can improve on this.
#171